Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat Review of draft-ietf-l2vpn-arp-mediation-17

From: Pete McCann <[email-masked]>
Date: Tue, 20 Sep 2011 13:37:02 -0400

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Document: draft-ietf-l2vpn-arp-mediation-17
Reviewer: Peter McCann
Review Date: 2011-09-20
IETF LC End Date:
IESG Telechat date: 2011-09-22

Summary: Ready

Major issues: none

Minor issues:

Section 5.2:
     Since this
     notification does not refer to any particular message the
     Message ID and Message Type fields are set to 0.
There does not appear to be a Message Type field in the PDU.

Nits/editorial comments:

Section 5: suggest replacing the idiom "chicken and egg situation"
with "possible deadlock situation."

Section 5.2: "Section 6. below." SHOULD BE "Section 6 below."