Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-art review of draft-ietf-nea-asokan-01.txt

From: "Moriarty, Kathleen" <[email-masked]>
Date: Fri, 21 Sep 2012 10:40:34 -0400

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at

<http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.

Document: draft-ietf-nea-asokan-01.txt
Reviewer: Kathleen Moriarty
Review Date: September 21, 2012
IETF LC End Date:
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Summary:  The document is ready for publication and there are just two tiny nits.

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:
In the introduction, I recommend including (NEA) after the full name is listed.  The acronym is used shortly after without being explicitly defined.

In the conclusion section, the second bullet is the only one that does not end with a ".".