Subject: [Gen-art] Review of draft-ietf-bess-evpn-vpws-10

From: Roni Even <[email-masked]>
Date: Mon, 06 Mar 2017 01:46:23 -0800

Reviewer: Roni Even
Review result: Ready with Nits

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Document: draft-ietf-bess-evpn-vpws-??
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date: 2017-03-06
IETF LC End Date: 2017-03-10
IESG Telechat date: 2017-04-13

Summary: The document is ready for publication as Standard track RFC

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments: 
In general lack some abbreviations expansions. just a few

1. In the abstract EVPN and PW
2. ASBR
3. In section 2 the reference to RFC7432 is not a link in the HTML and
PDF. The link is working in the other places the reference appears.