Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-yang-vrrp-07

From: Alissa Cooper <[email-masked]>
Date: Wed, 10 Jan 2018 14:53:05 -0500

Linda, thanks for your review. Authors, thanks for your responses. I have entered a No Objection ballot.

Alissa

> On Dec 15, 2017, at 10:02 PM, Xufeng Liu <[email-masked]> wrote:
> 
> Hi Linda,
> 
> Thanks for the review. We have added some descriptions as you suggested, and posted an updated version of the draft https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-rtgwg-yang-vrrp-08.
> 
> Thanks,
> - Xufeng
> 
>> -----Original Message-----
>> From: Linda Dunbar [mailto:[email-masked]]
>> Sent: Monday, December 4, 2017 6:25 PM
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>> Subject: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-yang-vrrp-07
>> 
>> 
>> Reviewer: Linda Dunbar
>> Review result: Ready with Nits/Comments
>> 
>> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review
>> Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the
>> IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments.
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>> Document: draft-ietf-rtgwg-yang-vrrp-07
>> Reviewer: Linda Dunbar
>> Review Date: 2017-12-04
>> IETF LC End Date: 2017-12-12
>> IESG Telechat date: 2018-01-11
>> 
>> Summary:
>> 
>> Major issues: None
>> 
>> Minor issues: None
>> 
>> Nits/editorial comments: It would be helpful to add description on why you need
>> both Tracking Interface and Tracking network. Both of them have the same
>> description "to detect interface connectivity failures".  What kind of
>> "connectivity failures" will be reported over the "Tracking Interface"? what
>> connectivity failures will be reported to "Tracking Network"?
>> 
>> Thanks, Linda Dunbar
>> 
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