Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Alissa Cooper's No Objection on draft-ietf-dnsop-attrleaf-13: (with COMMENT)

From: Dave Crocker <[email-masked]>
Date: Wed, 10 Oct 2018 14:04:14 -0400

On 10/10/2018 12:54 PM, Alissa Cooper wrote:
> The Gen-ART review for attrleaf is athttps://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/dnsop/dq-cwawY1UqoGJWFUxQPuWv0oPc.

hmmm.  I see that its addressing should have reached me but I'm not 
finding a copy in my mail archive.  Thanks for the pointer:

> From: Erik Kline <[email-masked]>
> To: <[email-masked]>
> Cc: [email-masked], [email-masked], [email-masked]
> Message-ID: <[email-masked]>
> Date: Wed, 26 Sep 2018 12:57:03 -0700
> Subject: [DNSOP] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-attrleaf-13

> Section 2:  "DNS nodes names" doesn't quite scan for me.  "DNS node names" perhaps?
> 
> Section 4.2: s/simply/simplify/?
> 
> Section 5: s/in the of/in the/?

done.

d/

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Dave Crocker
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