Subject: RE: Monday consensus text: #725 Appealing decisions

From: Harald Tveit Alvestrand <[email-masked]>
Date: Tue, 01 Feb 2005 06:10:44 +0100

--On tirsdag, februar 01, 2005 01:04:39 +0100 "Wijnen, Bert (Bert)" 
<[email-masked]> wrote:

> From Haralds latest text (below), the 2nd para reads:
>
>>     In the case where someone questions whether a decision or action of
>>     the IAD or the IAOC has been undertaken in accordance with IETF BCPs
>>     or IASA operational guidelines (including the question of whether
>>     appropriate guidelines have been created or maintained), he or she
>>     may ask the IAOC for a formal review of the decision or action.
>>
> Rob and certainly I (when editing this) had to read this 2 or 3 times.
> We think that the following (in our view) purely editorial change would
> make it more readable:
>
>       If a member of the IETF community questions whether a
>       decision or action of the IAD or the IAOC has been
>       undertaken in accordance with IETF BCPs or IASA
>       operational guidelines, or questions whether the IASA
>       has created and maintained appropriate guidelines,
>       he or she may ask the IAOC for a formal review of
>       the decision or action.
>
> OK?

Certainly OK with me.

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