Subject: Gen-ART LC Review of draft-shiomoto-ccamp-switch-programming

From: Ben Campbell <[email-masked]>
Date: Thu, 14 Jul 2011 16:09:35 -0500

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive.

Document: draft-shiomoto-ccamp-switch-programming-05
Reviewer: Ben Campbell
Review Date: 2011-07-14
IETF LC End Date: 2011-07-18

Summary: Ready for publication as an informational RFC

Major issues:

None

Minor issues:

None

Nits/editorial comments:

-- section 1, paragraph 4: "...with relation to the programming..."

... in relation to...

-- 3.1, last paragraph:

Note that the references say SHOULD rather than MUST. Using "must not" here, even non-normatively, seems a bit overstated.