Subject: Re: [MEDIACTRL] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-mediactrl-vxml-03.txt

From: Dave Burke <[email-masked]>
Date: Sun, 8 Feb 2009 21:51:55 +0000

Editorial nits fixed in draft-ietf-mediactrl-vxml-04 (just posted to I-D
repository).

Dave

On Wed, Jan 21, 2009 at 8:43 PM, McCann Peter-A001034 <
[email-masked]> wrote:

> I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer
> for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
> http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html ).
>
> Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
> you may receive.
>
> Document: draft-ietf-mediactrl-vxml-03.txt
> Reviewer: Pete McCann
> Review Date: 2009-01-22
> IETF LC End Date: 2009-01-26
> IESG Telechat date: (not known)
>
> Summary: Ready.  The document is well-written and complete.
>
> Major issues: None
>
> Minor issues: None
>
> Nits/editorial comments:
>
>   Section 2.5: "encoutering" should be "encountering"
>
>   Section 4.2: "converted to to their JSON value" should be "converted
> to their JSON value"
>
>
>

-- 
Dave Burke

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