Subject: [Mip6] [issue28] Gen-Art review comments

From: Basavaraj Patil <[email-masked]>
Date: Thu, 01 Sep 2005 21:07:06 +0000

New submission from Basavaraj Patil <[email-masked]>:

>From Gen-ART review by Mark Allman:

  + Section 1: "mainly target user-level" --> "mainly targets
    user-level"

  + Section 1: While the document is fine without specifying error
    handling it might be nice to add a note that this is not good
    practice.

  + Section 1: "deployed among implementations, it" --> "deployed, it"

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category: Editorial
draft: draft-ietf-mip6-mipext-advapi
messages: 94
nosy: bpatil
priority: Should fix
status: No discussion
title: Gen-Art review comments

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