Subject: [Mip6] [issue62] editorial errors

From: Ryuji Wakikawa <[email-masked]>
Date: Wed, 15 Feb 2006 15:35:45 +0000

New submission from Ryuji Wakikawa <[email-masked]>:

All editorial errors 

1. The section 2.3.2.1 is somehow after the section 2.3.2.2.

2. In the section 2.3.2.1 (4th paragraph),  
"The binding update is encapsulated in UDP then IPv4 with the home agent's IPv4 address in the source 
address field and... "
	should be changed to
"The Binding Acknowledgment is encapsulated in UDP then ..."

3. in Section 4.1 B. Binding Acknowledgment
The addresses in IPv4 and IPv6 header are reverse.

4. In section 3.1.1
The preference field only has 5 bit. It should be expanded to 6bit.

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category: Editorial
draft: draft-ietf-mip6-nemo-v4traversal
messages: 201
nosy: ryuji
priority: Should fix
status: No discussion
title: editorial errors

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