Subject: [Sipping] Errors in service-examples-08

From: Joël Repiquet <[email-masked]>
Date: Fri, 20 May 2005 06:34:40 +0200

Hi,
I have noticed some editorial errors in draft-ietf-sipping-service-examples-08:

2.3 Music On Hold
-----------------
p.34: "with hold SDP" duplicated
p.37, F6: "Carol -> Bob" to be replaced by "Music Server -> Bob"
      F7: "atlanta" to be replaced by "biloxi" in "o=" SDP field
p.38, F8: "bob" to be replaced by "alice" in Contact field
p.40, F14: "bob" to be replaced by "alice" in Contact field

2.4 Transfer - Unattended
-------------------------
p.42, in the time-diagram:
 F15 and F16 for the two last messages instead of F14 and F15
 and in the text below: F14 to be replaced by F15 (twice)
p.44: "Alice peforms" -> "Alice performs"
      F5: "1 REFER" instead of "2 REFER" (very likely)
p.45, F6: "1 REFER" instead of "2 REFER"
      F9: "2 BYE" instead of "3 BYE"
p.46, F10: "2 BYE" instead of "3 BYE"

2.5 Transfer - Attended
-------------------------
p.56, F16:
     "tag=1234567" to be replaced by "tag=23431" in From field
     "tag=23431" to be replaced by "tag=1234567" in To field
p.57, F17:
     Alice should be mentioned in the Contact field, instead of Bob
p.57, F18: "Bob -> Alice" instead of "Bob -> Carol"
     The following fields:
       To: Bob <sips:[email-masked]>;tag=1234567
       From: Carol <sips:[email-masked]>;tag=5f35a3
     to be replaced by:
       To: Bob <sips:[email-masked]>;tag=23431
       From: Alice <sips:[email-masked]>;tag=1234567
p.58, F20:
     "carol" instead of "alice" in "o=" SDP field
p.58, F21:
     "1 ACK" instead of "1 INVITE" in CSeq field
p.59, F24:
     the message body is an excerpt of F20 (I believe)
     and as a result, the To, From, Call-ID and Contact
     fields should be:
      To: Carol <sips:[email-masked]>;tag=ff3a
      From: Alice <sips:[email-masked]>;tag=3461
      Call-ID: [email-masked]
      Contact: <sips:[email-masked]>
     instead of:
      From: Carol <sips:[email-masked]>;tag=ff3a
      To: Alice <sips:[email-masked]>;tag=3461
      Call-ID: [email-masked]
      Contact: <sips:[email-masked]>
p.60, F25:
     "Bob -> Alice" instead of "Bob -> Carol"
     and
     the To and From fields should be:
      From: Alice <sips:[email-masked]>;tag=1234567
      To: Bob <sips:[email-masked]>;tag=23431
     instead of:
      From: Carol <sips:[email-masked]>;tag=5f35a3
      To: Bob <sips:[email-masked]>;tag=1234567

Cheers
Joël

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