Subject: [Sipping] RE: [Fwd: WGLC of draft-ietf-sipping-service-examples-10.txt]

From: "Elwell, John" <[email-masked]>
Date: Mon, 05 Mar 2007 08:00:42 +0000

The comments I raised during my earlier review have now been dealt with
satisfactorily.

John 

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Gonzalo Camarillo [mailto:[email-masked]] 
> Sent: 03 March 2007 12:46
> To: Gonzalo Camarillo
> Cc: [email-masked]; Elwell, John; 
> [email-masked]; [email-masked]; 
> [email-masked]; [email-masked]; [email-masked]; 
> [email-masked]; [email-masked]; Mary Barnes; 
> Alan Johnston; Robert Sparks; 
> [email-masked]; Cullen Jennings; Jon Peterson
> Subject: Re: [Fwd: WGLC of draft-ietf-sipping-service-examples-10.txt]
> 
> Dear reviewers of the service examples draft,
> 
> the authors have submitted yet another revision of the draft that is 
> supposed to address your last set of comments on revision 11. As in 
> previous occasions, could you please have a look at it and 
> send a note 
> to the SIPPING mailing list, cc:ing the chairs, stating 
> whether or not 
> you are now OK with the draft?
> 
> http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-sipping-service
-examples-12.txt
> 
> For your convenience, your reviews are stored at:
> 
> http://www.softarmor.com/sipping/process/wg-review/sipping-rt-
> wglc.html
> 
> The diff between revisions 11 and 12 is available at:
> 
> http://tools.ietf.org/wg/sipping/draft-ietf-sipping-service-ex
amples/draft-ietf-sipping-service-examples-12-from-11.diff.html
> 
> Thanks,
> 
> Gonzalo
> 
> 
> Gonzalo Camarillo wrote:
> > Dear reviewers of the service examples draft,
> > 
> > the authors of the draft have submitted a new revision of 
> the draft that 
> > is supposed to address all your WGLC comments. Could you 
> please have a 
> > look at it and send a note to the SIPPING mailing list, cc:ing the 
> > chairs, stating whether or not you are now OK with the draft?
> > 
> > 
> http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-sipping-servicFrom [email-masked] Mon Mar 05 03:03:19 2007
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Date: Mon, 05 Mar 2007 08:00:42 +0000
From: "Elwell, John" <[email-masked]>
To: Gonzalo Camarillo <[email-masked]>, [email-masked]
Cc: 
Subject: [Sipping] RE: [Fwd: WGLC of
	draft-ietf-sipping-service-examples-10.txt]

The comments I raised during my earlier review have now been dealt with
satisfactorily.

John 

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Gonzalo Camarillo [mailto:[email-masked]] 
> Sent: 03 March 2007 12:46
> To: Gonzalo Camarillo
> Cc: [email-masked]; Elwell, John; 
> [email-masked]; [email-masked]; 
> [email-masked]; [email-masked]; [email-masked]; 
> [email-masked]; [email-masked]; Mary Barnes; 
> Alan Johnston; Robert Sparks; 
> [email-masked]; Cullen Jennings; Jon Peterson
> Subject: Re: [Fwd: WGLC of draft-ietf-sipping-service-examples-10.txt]
> 
> Dear reviewers of the service examples draft,
> 
> the authors have submitted yet another revision of the draft that is 
> supposed to address your last set of comments on revision 11. As in 
> previous occasions, could you please have a look at it and 
> send a note 
> to the SIPPING mailing list, cc:ing the chairs, stating 
> whether or not 
> you are now OK with the draft?
> 
> http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-sipping-service
-examples-12.txt
> 
> For your convenience, your reviews are stored at:
> 
> http://www.softarmor.com/sipping/process/wg-review/sipping-rt-
> wglc.html
> 
> The diff between revisions 11 and 12 is available at:
> 
> http://tools.ietf.org/wg/sipping/draft-ietf-sipping-service-ex
amples/draft-ietf-sipping-service-examples-12-from-11.diff.html
> 
> Thanks,
> 
> Gonzalo
> 
> 
> Gonzalo Camarillo wrote:
> > Dear reviewers of the service examples draft,
> > 
> > the authors of the draft have submitted a new revision of 
> the draft that 
> > is supposed to address all your WGLC comments. Could you 
> please have a 
> > look at it and send a note to the SIPPING mailing list, cc:ing the 
> > chairs, stating whether or not you are now OK with the draft?
> > 
> > 
> http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-sipping-service
-examples-11.txt 
> > 
> > 
> > For your convenience, your reviews are stored at:
> > 
> http://www.softarmor.com/sipping/process/wg-review/sipping-rt-
> wglc.html
> > 
> > Thanks,
> > 
> > Gonzalo
> > 
> > Gonzalo Camarillo wrote:
> >> Hi,
> >>
> >> all of you in the 'To' field of this email have 
> volunteered to review
> >> the service examples draft. Thanks a lot for agreeing to 
> perform this
> >> review.
> >>
> >> This is how we would like to divide the work: in the list 
> below, I have
> >> assigned a few sections to each of the reviewers. When you 
> are done with
> >> your review, send it in a reply-to-all to the email below, 
> which was the
> >> WGLC for this draft on the SIPPING mailing list. We would 
> like to have 
> >> all the reviews ready by the end of the WGLC, on July 1st.
> >>
> >>
> >> <[email-masked]>
> >>      2.1.  Call Hold
> >>      2.2.  Consultation Hold
> >>
> >> <[email-masked]>
> >>      2.3.  Music On Hold
> >>      2.18. Automatic Redial
> >>      2.19. Click to Dial
> >>
> >> <[email-masked]>
> >>      2.4.  Transfer - Unattended
> >>      2.5.  Transfer - Attended
> >>      2.6.  Transfer - Instant Messaging
> >>
> >> <[email-masked]>
> >>      2.7.  Call Forwarding Unconditional
> >>      2.8.  Call Forwarding - Busy
> >>      2.9.  Call Forwarding - No Answer
> >>
> >> <[email-masked]>
> >>      2.10. 3-way Conference - Third Party is Added
> >>      2.11. 3-way Conference - Third Party Joins
> >>
> >> <[email-masked]>
> >>      2.12. Single Line Extension
> >>
> >> <[email-masked]>
> >>      2.13. Find-Me
> >>
> >> <[email-masked]>
> >>      2.14. Call Management (Incoming Call Screening)
> >>      2.15. Call Management (Outgoing Call Screening)
> >>
> >> <[email-masked]>
> >>      2.16. Call Park
> >>      2.17. Call Pickup
> >>
> >>
> >> Thanks,
> >>
> >> Gonzalo
> >>
> >>
> >>
> >> -------- Original Message --------
> >> Subject: WGLC  of draft-ietf-sipping-service-examples-10.txt
> >> Date: Thu, 11 May 2006 20:37:40 +0300
> >> From: Gonzalo Camarillo <[email-masked]>
> >> To: sipping <[email-masked]>
> >> CC: Samuli Pöykkö <[email-masked]>,  Mary Barnes
> >> <[email-masked]>, Alan Johnston 
> <[email-masked]>, Robert
> >> Sparks <[email-masked]>,  [email-masked]
> >>
> >> Folks,
> >>
> >> we would like to working group last call (WGLC) the 
> following draft:
> >>
> >> 
> http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-sipping-service
-examples-10.txt 
> >>
> >>
> >> as you have probably noticed if you clicked on the link 
> above, this is a
> >> very long draft. Therefore, we would like to get at least 
> ten volunteers
> >> to review it. We will assign a couple of sections to each reviewer.
> >>
> >> If you are interested and willing to review this draft, 
> please send an
> >> email to the SIPPING chairs.
> >>
> >> The email below should be considered as a WGLC comment:
> >>
> >> http://www1.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/sipping/current/msg10886.html
> >>
> >> This is the output of the idnits tool:
> >>
> >> idnits 1.96
> >>
> >> tmp/draft-ietf-sipping-service-examples-10.txt:
> >>
> >>
> >>   Checking nits according to http://www.ietf.org/ID-Checklist.html:
> >>
> >>     Checking conformance with RFC 3978/3979 boilerplate...
> >>
> >>     the boilerplate looks good.
> >>
> >>   * There is 1 instance of too long lines in the document, 
> the longest 
> >> one
> >>     being 1 character in excess of 72.
> >>
> >>   Checking nits according to 
> http://www.ietf.org/ietf/1id-guidelines.txt:
> >>     Nothing found here (but these checks do not cover all of
> >>     1id-guidelines.txt yet).
> >>
> >>   Miscellaneous warnings:
> >>   - Line 1028 has weird spacing: '... /* Bob  place...'
> >>   - Line 1404 has weird spacing: '... /* Bob  takes...'
> >>   - Line 1732 has weird spacing: '... /* Bob  place...'
> >>   - Line 2459 has weird spacing: '...and Bob  have ...'
> >>   - Line 2597 has weird spacing: '... /* Bob  pute
-examples-11.txt 
> > 
> > 
> > For your convenience, your reviews are stored at:
> > 
> http://www.softarmor.com/sipping/process/wg-review/sipping-rt-
> wglc.html
> > 
> > Thanks,
> > 
> > Gonzalo
> > 
> > Gonzalo Camarillo wrote:
> >> Hi,
> >>
> >> all of you in the 'To' field of this email have 
> volunteered to review
> >> the service examples draft. Thanks a lot for agreeing to 
> perform this
> >> review.
> >>
> >> This is how we would like to divide the work: in the list 
> below, I have
> >> assigned a few sections to each of the reviewers. When you 
> are done with
> >> your review, send it in a reply-to-all to the email below, 
> which was the
> >> WGLC for this draft on the SIPPING mailing list. We would 
> like to have 
> >> all the reviews ready by the end of the WGLC, on July 1st.
> >>
> >>
> >> <[email-masked]>
> >>      2.1.  Call Hold
> >>      2.2.  Consultation Hold
> >>
> >> <[email-masked]>
> >>      2.3.  Music On Hold
> >>      2.18. Automatic Redial
> >>      2.19. Click to Dial
> >>
> >> <[email-masked]>
> >>      2.4.  Transfer - Unattended
> >>      2.5.  Transfer - Attended
> >>      2.6.  Transfer - Instant Messaging
> >>
> >> <[email-masked]>
> >>      2.7.  Call Forwarding Unconditional
> >>      2.8.  Call Forwarding - Busy
> >>      2.9.  Call Forwarding - No Answer
> >>
> >> <[email-masked]>
> >>      2.10. 3-way Conference - Third Party is Added
> >>      2.11. 3-way Conference - Third Party Joins
> >>
> >> <[email-masked]>
> >>      2.12. Single Line Extension
> >>
> >> <[email-masked]>
> >>      2.13. Find-Me
> >>
> >> <[email-masked]>
> >>      2.14. Call Management (Incoming Call Screening)
> >>      2.15. Call Management (Outgoing Call Screening)
> >>
> >> <[email-masked]>
> >>      2.16. Call Park
> >>      2.17. Call Pickup
> >>
> >>
> >> Thanks,
> >>
> >> Gonzalo
> >>
> >>
> >>
> >> -------- Original Message --------
> >> Subject: WGLC  of draft-ietf-sipping-service-examples-10.txt
> >> Date: Thu, 11 May 2006 20:37:40 +0300
> >> From: Gonzalo Camarillo <[email-masked]>
> >> To: sipping <[email-masked]>
> >> CC: Samuli Pöykkö <[email-masked]>,  Mary Barnes
> >> <[email-masked]>, Alan Johnston 
> <[email-masked]>, Robert
> >> Sparks <[email-masked]>,  [email-masked]
> >>
> >> Folks,
> >>
> >> we would like to working group last call (WGLC) the 
> following draft:
> >>
> >> 
> http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-sipping-service
-examples-10.txt 
> >>
> >>
> >> as you have probably noticed if you clicked on the link 
> above, this is a
> >> very long draft. Therefore, we would like to get at least 
> ten volunteers
> >> to review it. We will assign a couple of sections to each reviewer.
> >>
> >> If you are interested and willing to review this draft, 
> please send an
> >> email to the SIPPING chairs.
> >>
> >> The email below should be considered as a WGLC comment:
> >>
> >> http://www1.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/sipping/current/msg10886.html
> >>
> >> This is the output of the idnits tool:
> >>
> >> idnits 1.96
> >>
> >> tmp/draft-ietf-sipping-service-examples-10.txt:
> >>
> >>
> >>   Checking nits according to http://www.ietf.org/ID-Checklist.html:
> >>
> >>     Checking conformance with RFC 3978/3979 boilerplate...
> >>
> >>     the boilerplate looks good.
> >>
> >>   * There is 1 instance of too long lines in the document, 
> the longest 
> >> one
> >>     being 1 character in excess of 72.
> >>
> >>   Checking nits according to 
> http://www.ietf.org/ietf/1id-guidelines.txt:
> >>     Nothing found here (but these checks do not cover all of
> >>     1id-guidelines.txt yet).
> >>
> >>   Miscellaneous warnings:
> >>   - Line 1028 has weird spacing: '... /* Bob  place...'
> >>   - Line 1404 has weird spacing: '... /* Bob  takes...'
> >>   - Line 1732 has weird spacing: '... /* Bob  place...'
> >>   - Line 2459 has weird spacing: '...and Bob  have ...'
> >>   - Line 2597 has weird spacing: '... /* Bob  puts ...'
> >>   - (4 more instances...)
> >>
> >>   Experimental warnings:
> >>   - Unused Reference: [18] is defined on line 7860, but 
> not referenced
> >>   - Unused Reference: [13] is defined on line 7839, but 
> not referenced
> >>   - Unused Reference: [14] is defined on line 7842, but 
> not referenced
> >>   - Unused Reference: [1] is defined on line 7795, but not 
> referenced
> >>
> >>
> >>
> >>
> >> This WGLC will end on July 1st, 2006 (a long draft needs a 
> long WGLC).
> >>
> >> Thanks,
> >>
> >> Gonzalo
> >> SIPPING co-chair
> >>
> >>
> >>
> > 
> > 
> 

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