Subject: [Teas] draft-ietf-teas-ietf-network-slice-definition-00.txt

From: Kiran Makhijani <[email-masked]>
Date: Thu, 4 Feb 2021 03:15:49 +0000

Hello TEAS,
Thank you Chairs and WG for adoption and supporting this work.  We request the group to provide comments to further improve the document.

The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:

https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-teas-ietf-network-slice-definition/

>From top of my head I remember 2 early requests that are unresolved. Others have been discussed.

  *   we should mention that this is more than connectivity (is covered in Section 3.)
  *   relating TE abstract network topology to that in network slices (I think framework is a better place for this).

We look forward to additional comments.
Regards,
Kiran/Authors