Subject: [tsvwg] Editorial comments for draft-briscoe-tsvwg-l4s-diffserv-01

From: David Pullen <[email-masked]>
Date: Mon, 17 Dec 2018 14:46:10 -0500

Hi Bob,

In section 4.1 of draft-briscoe-tsvwg-l4s-diffserv-01:

coupling ensures that L traffic makes space for it by underutiliizing

"Underutilizing" is misspelled, there appears to be an extra "i" before the
"z".

This is the only editorial comment I have for this draft. I will look at it
from a technical perspective next.

Thanks,
  - Dave

David Pullen
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